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john Newbie

 Joined: 22 Jan 2004 Posts: 9
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Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2004 2:02 pm
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Hello All
please check my new website about Crystal Caves
Give me suggestions and how you feel
http://www.caves.net.ms
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Dogbreath Admin

 Joined: 14 Sep 2002 Posts: 4328 Location: In the back of a jacked-up Ford.
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Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2004 4:21 pm
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| Nice, but incomplete. You'd probably want to fix those broken links before advertising it on a broad scale. |
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john Newbie

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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2004 1:23 pm
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ok
check now still the download page I didnt do it yet |
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john Newbie

 Joined: 22 Jan 2004 Posts: 9
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2004 11:42 am
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OK
Website finished third look update today
Now you can give me suggetion and whatever...  |
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Interon Guest
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Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 7:41 pm
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Overall, nice job!
Suggestions: On the front page, make the font a little smaller. Also, the pictures of the creatures are a bit blurry. I can sharpen them for you if you want. |
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john Newbie

 Joined: 22 Jan 2004 Posts: 9
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 2:26 am
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| ok do whatever you want then upload it |
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Joris Way too much free time

 Joined: 27 Jul 2003 Posts: 377 Location: the Netherlands
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 11:12 am
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| Your website is getting better! The font size may still be a bit smaller. If you can't see it yourself you need glasses... |
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Interon Guest
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Bobo Moderator

 Joined: 10 Oct 2002 Posts: 849 Location: Twilight Zone
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 12:22 pm
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| Instead of making those fonts HUGE (like main page). Just bold them |
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Joris Way too much free time

 Joined: 27 Jul 2003 Posts: 377 Location: the Netherlands
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 12:38 pm
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| na010894 wrote: | http://students.cna.nl.ca/~na010894/cce.jpg
Here is the new version of cce.jpg. |
the pic is worser than the one that's now on the website... |
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john Newbie

 Joined: 22 Jan 2004 Posts: 9
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 12:47 pm
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what you did ? it is the same cce.jpg and it is more bigger (size)
but i will re do it qll coz it is soooooooooooo wrong
ok i will bold main menu letters |
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Joris Way too much free time

 Joined: 27 Jul 2003 Posts: 377 Location: the Netherlands
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 4:45 pm
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| Make the text on the frontpage etc. in the same size as at the menu, it will be better in my opinion then... |
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wardrich lawl catz r lawlz

 Joined: 14 Sep 2002 Posts: 3361 Location: Ontario Canada
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 7:57 pm
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Typos/fix ups.
(in the CCE image)
1) Very easy to kill, however, one must be patient when it dies. You musn't walk over its buddy.
2) Pretty much the same as the first. Easy to kill.
3) These monsters are larger than many of the others in the game. They occaisionally appear in small areas with lots of crystals.
4) These monsters are REALLY crazy, however, they are simple to kill.
[not sure what you mean about standing over and shoot]
5) What is this? It's the most bizarre thing you will EVER see. Note that you can only hurt him when his eyes are open.
6) Strange robot of the future. The funniest thing is when two or more of them attack you simultaneously
7) The most annoying monster in Crystal Caves. They move at great speeds and in somewhat random paths.
8) These are the strongest enemies in the game. Be very cautious when approaching them.
9) This creature is very noisy. He is also strange.
10) These monsters are easy to kill, however, they have that annoying ability to become invisible.
11) These spiders are extremely easy to defeat. Just be careful when standing under them. They have a tendancy to shoot webs at you.
12) These are by far the most disgusting monsters in the game. Stand underneath one. Is it dropping eggs? Or are those bird-bombs?
13) Purple snake of death... Or is that barney in disguise? Watch out for these things. They like to hide in walls and come out just before you are directly adjacent to them. It's generally easier to run away from them than to stand there and try to kill one.
14) Shroom Of Doom. These are actually really easy to kill... if you know how. You need to wait for them to stand up. They are invulnerable when in their sitting position.
15) These are easy to kill... the only hard part is hitting them. They tend to bounce all over the screen.
16) Mining Cars. What are they carrying? Perhaps the life that you lost when you hit the last one...
17) These robot-like objects are a true nuisance. The walk all over the place AND they try to shoot you.
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I STRONGLY suggest you change ALL the captions to the ones I just typed up. No offense meant, but your english really isn't all that great, and many of those don't make sense. I'd think your best bet is to just copy and paste the ones I made for ya.
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john Newbie

 Joined: 22 Jan 2004 Posts: 9
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2004 12:27 am
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ok thank you very very much Richard
as my english sux in the website i will make a thnk u list !  |
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386_player Newbie

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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 10:46 pm
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