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Uhhh. Help. [WORD FOR DUMMIES]
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dosraider
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 4:20 pm     Post subject: Reply with quote

GAMER wrote:
So, if you wouldn't mind reading a 7000 word story, i'll email it to you tomorrow evening. Happy
Cool GAMER


Me too please, it's time I read something that's written in proper English.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 7:40 pm     Post subject: Reply with quote

ok sure, pm me and i'll give you the e-mail.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:18 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

Any objections to posting in this thread?

That way, no emailing...and i can update in here as i go.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:27 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

Well unless you're afraid somebody might copy-paste it and claim it as his/her own, I don't see why not! Congratulatory
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:37 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

Larry Laffer wrote:
Well unless you're afraid somebody might copy-paste it and claim it as his/her own, I don't see why not! Congratulatory


Hmm. That is kind of worrying. I think, yeah, if you want to read it PM me your email and i'll send.

I think there also might be some rule about doing that too. (against school rules type deal)

So yar. PM me your emails.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 3:27 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

PMed you my email (the special junk box , naaaaaa)

But you know when you hit the mail button you also get our email.
But maybe some aren't valid anymore.

Not too many dirty words in your writings, I may hope, or my special pron spam filter will ditch it.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 4:16 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh. Really?

There's quite a few swears actually.

Meh. Sending anyway.

(Yeah, my "mail" thing is an email i was using about 3 years ago...)

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 8:56 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

If it's not too much of a problem, send it to me at my DGF e-mail account. (dogbreath at dosgames dot com) You've sent me some of your stuff in the past (a play you did, I think? Or was it a dramatic reading?) and I thought it was very good.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:06 pm     Post subject: Reply with quote

You're a person who's able to write violently.
Pretty dark story.
I love it, really.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:52 pm     Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you dosraider. Happy

I wrote a lot of it about 4 months into my "illness" so i was less than happy at that point. Many of the violent parts you speak of were influenced by my emotions triggered by enduring school when ill. Not a fan of small children or bad teachers. Tbbbbbth!

Feel free to criticise parts or ask any questions you may have. It'd really benefit the story.

Cool GAMER

p.s. Some of you are American...does it irritate you when us Aussies spell things "wrong" ?? Tbbbbbth!
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 9:21 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

My grade 12 British Lit teacher was, yes, British, and she made us write papers in Standard English rather than American English. Because of this I'm now hopelessly confused, and often times accidentially use different spellings interchangably. (color/colour, and aluminum/aluminium are my most frequent)

So the spelling doesn't bother me, but sometimes Australian colloquialisms are funny.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 3:25 pm     Post subject: Reply with quote

GAMER wrote:
Feel free to criticise parts or ask any questions you may have. It'd really benefit the story.

I already said I found it good.
I've slimed enough.

Tbbbbbth!

Was a real good story, really.
And a nice read, thanks.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 9:38 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

'Twas good! Anticlimatic but good Tbbbbbth!


PS: Dogbreath: You're an ass!
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 9:50 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

Gamer doesn't do sleep and gets 8 hours of drugs. Confuzzled
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 10:52 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

click the horizontal line to seperate it... i believe the horizontal line is a page break.

so, click it and it will magicay show the gap between the pages like it should oO.

edit, just click before it and press delete Tbbbbbth! away it goes... or it does in office XP with the latest updates.


Franpa, phpBB forums have a nifty feature called an "edit button"! Use it wisely! - Larry
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