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dosraider Admin

 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 8879 Location: ROTFLMAO in Belgium.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 4:20 pm
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| GAMER wrote: | So, if you wouldn't mind reading a 7000 word story, i'll email it to you tomorrow evening.
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Me too please, it's time I read something that's written in proper English. |
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lakerzz8 ~Lakerz~Fan~
 Joined: 14 Sep 2002 Posts: 763 Location: L.A., California
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 7:40 pm
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| ok sure, pm me and i'll give you the e-mail. |
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GAMER Gaming Demi-god

 Joined: 22 Sep 2002 Posts: 1527 Location: chasing chikeds in the snow!
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:18 am
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Any objections to posting in this thread?
That way, no emailing...and i can update in here as i go.
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Larry Laffer Admin

 Joined: 19 Feb 2006 Posts: 4155 Location: Romania
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:27 am
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Well unless you're afraid somebody might copy-paste it and claim it as his/her own, I don't see why not!  |
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GAMER Gaming Demi-god

 Joined: 22 Sep 2002 Posts: 1527 Location: chasing chikeds in the snow!
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:37 am
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| Larry Laffer wrote: | Well unless you're afraid somebody might copy-paste it and claim it as his/her own, I don't see why not!  |
Hmm. That is kind of worrying. I think, yeah, if you want to read it PM me your email and i'll send.
I think there also might be some rule about doing that too. (against school rules type deal)
So yar. PM me your emails.
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dosraider Admin

 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 8879 Location: ROTFLMAO in Belgium.
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 3:27 am
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PMed you my email (the special junk box , naaaaaa)
But you know when you hit the mail button you also get our email.
But maybe some aren't valid anymore.
Not too many dirty words in your writings, I may hope, or my special pron spam filter will ditch it. |
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GAMER Gaming Demi-god

 Joined: 22 Sep 2002 Posts: 1527 Location: chasing chikeds in the snow!
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 4:16 am
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Oh. Really?
There's quite a few swears actually.
Meh. Sending anyway.
(Yeah, my "mail" thing is an email i was using about 3 years ago...)
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Dogbreath Admin

 Joined: 14 Sep 2002 Posts: 4624 Location: In the back of a jacked-up Ford.
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 8:56 am
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| If it's not too much of a problem, send it to me at my DGF e-mail account. (dogbreath at dosgames dot com) You've sent me some of your stuff in the past (a play you did, I think? Or was it a dramatic reading?) and I thought it was very good. |
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dosraider Admin

 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 8879 Location: ROTFLMAO in Belgium.
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:06 pm
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You're a person who's able to write violently.
Pretty dark story.
I love it, really. |
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GAMER Gaming Demi-god

 Joined: 22 Sep 2002 Posts: 1527 Location: chasing chikeds in the snow!
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:52 pm
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Thank you dosraider.
I wrote a lot of it about 4 months into my "illness" so i was less than happy at that point. Many of the violent parts you speak of were influenced by my emotions triggered by enduring school when ill. Not a fan of small children or bad teachers.
Feel free to criticise parts or ask any questions you may have. It'd really benefit the story.
GAMER
p.s. Some of you are American...does it irritate you when us Aussies spell things "wrong" ??  |
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Dogbreath Admin

 Joined: 14 Sep 2002 Posts: 4624 Location: In the back of a jacked-up Ford.
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 9:21 am
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My grade 12 British Lit teacher was, yes, British, and she made us write papers in Standard English rather than American English. Because of this I'm now hopelessly confused, and often times accidentially use different spellings interchangably. (color/colour, and aluminum/aluminium are my most frequent)
So the spelling doesn't bother me, but sometimes Australian colloquialisms are funny. |
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dosraider Admin

 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 8879 Location: ROTFLMAO in Belgium.
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 3:25 pm
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| GAMER wrote: | | Feel free to criticise parts or ask any questions you may have. It'd really benefit the story. |
I already said I found it good.
I've slimed enough.
Was a real good story, really.
And a nice read, thanks.
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Larry Laffer Admin

 Joined: 19 Feb 2006 Posts: 4155 Location: Romania
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 9:38 am
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'Twas good! Anticlimatic but good
PS: Dogbreath: You're an ass! |
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Dogbreath Admin

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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 9:50 am
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Gamer doesn't do sleep and gets 8 hours of drugs.  |
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franpa Way too much free time

 Joined: 02 Jan 2006 Posts: 848 Location: australia, qld
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 10:52 am
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click the horizontal line to seperate it... i believe the horizontal line is a page break.
so, click it and it will magicay show the gap between the pages like it should oO.
edit, just click before it and press delete away it goes... or it does in office XP with the latest updates.
Franpa, phpBB forums have a nifty feature called an "edit button"! Use it wisely! - Larry |
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