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Dogbreath Admin

 Joined: 14 Sep 2002 Posts: 4439 Location: In the back of a jacked-up Ford.
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Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2002 6:20 pm
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Oz Way too much free time

 Joined: 15 Sep 2002 Posts: 585 Location: London, UK.
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 6:12 pm
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well, my favourite haiku, written by Albert Finney in 1929, is:
five syllables,
then seven, five again,
no rhyme.
or something like that.... |
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GAMER Gaming Demi-god

 Joined: 22 Sep 2002 Posts: 1434 Location: chasing chikeds in the snow!
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Posted: Sat Feb 01, 2003 4:58 am
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ummm...
is your first line supposed to only have 4 syllables? and is your 2nd supposed to have 6?
GAMER. |
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Interon Guest
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2004 12:12 pm
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| Yeah, give us the official format, if you don't mind. |
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Icedragon Lord of Gaming

 Joined: 21 Mar 2004 Posts: 229
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Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2004 5:47 pm
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The offical format is 5, 7, 5
I like this one i read about Mircosoft.
Death, Tax, Lost Data.
All are inevitable
Guess which has occured. |
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NIK Newbie

 Joined: 06 May 2004 Posts: 8 Location: Ontario
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2004 9:54 pm
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10 print "This is a"
20 print "Haiku program"
30 goto 10 |
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Kazer0 Mercenary Dishwasher
 Joined: 17 Sep 2002 Posts: 2719 Location: In an igloo with my pet penguin, eh?
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2004 10:25 pm
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A forest blows in wind.
This is a haiku. haiku.
A mighty fine one.
A lot like my poem actually,
Roses are Red,
Violates are blue,
This is a poem. |
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Cakephatt Expert

 Joined: 10 Oct 2004 Posts: 196 Location: i live in a box
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Posted: Fri May 06, 2005 12:48 am
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A confused old man
Will he be lost forever?
Only time will tell
Something grabs his foot
Oops! He slipped on a pine cone!
He is very dead
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Cakephatt Expert

 Joined: 10 Oct 2004 Posts: 196 Location: i live in a box
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Posted: Fri May 06, 2005 12:51 am
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Be good to hobos
Or they will eat your Cherrio's
Silent like the night
Eating your garbage
Or are they eating your soul?
Be good to hobos |
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Cakephatt Expert

 Joined: 10 Oct 2004 Posts: 196 Location: i live in a box
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Posted: Sat May 07, 2005 7:10 pm
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A fat Mexican
Pedro does eat the corn dog
Will corn dog eat him?
Walking home from school
The corn dog eats his insides
Then it eats his face.
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Cakephatt Expert

 Joined: 10 Oct 2004 Posts: 196 Location: i live in a box
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Posted: Sun May 08, 2005 11:23 am
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I wash my bad hands
Because I just made bacon
Please eat my bacon
I am special chef
Like decroded peice of craps
I make good bacon
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Gamer_V Gaming Demi-god

 Joined: 03 Mar 2005 Posts: 1143 Location: The Netherlands
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 10:27 am
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Uh... 5 7 5?
Let the wind blow hard
Does the wind blow like it should
Will we wait for tomorrow?
It is still, still raining
When will it ever stop, stop raining?
I am getting quite wet |
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2LT Worm American Hero

 Joined: 25 May 2004 Posts: 1273 Location: Indianapolis, IN
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 7:12 pm
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Let the rain fall down
The drops disturb a smooth lake
My mind remains calm.
The church bells chime twelve
One more year closer to death
Another from youth.
I feel like baking.
Maybe some brownies or cake.
Damn, I don't have eggs! |
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2LT Worm American Hero

 Joined: 25 May 2004 Posts: 1273 Location: Indianapolis, IN
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 5:59 pm
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GUREI miru
ame futotte yo
chotto shinu
All I see is gray.
The rain keeps on falling down.
I die a little. |
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