My Crystal Caves Wesbite
My Crystal Caves Wesbite
Hello All
please check my new website about Crystal Caves
Give me suggestions and how you feel
http://www.caves.net.ms
John
please check my new website about Crystal Caves
Give me suggestions and how you feel
http://www.caves.net.ms
John
Your website is getting better! The font size may still be a bit smaller. If you can't see it yourself you need glasses...
Webmaster www.playdosgames.com
Instead of making those fonts HUGE (like main page). Just bold them
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^ Biggest Dos 3D Shooters site in the World!
Total Games = <b>201</b>
Over <b>100900</b> Downloads since 2004
Make the text on the frontpage etc. in the same size as at the menu, it will be better in my opinion then...
Webmaster www.playdosgames.com
Typos/fix ups.
(in the CCE image)
1) Very easy to kill, however, one must be patient when it dies. You musn't walk over its buddy.
2) Pretty much the same as the first. Easy to kill.
3) These monsters are larger than many of the others in the game. They occaisionally appear in small areas with lots of crystals.
4) These monsters are REALLY crazy, however, they are simple to kill.
[not sure what you mean about standing over and shoot]
5) What is this? It's the most bizarre thing you will EVER see. Note that you can only hurt him when his eyes are open.
6) Strange robot of the future. The funniest thing is when two or more of them attack you simultaneously
7) The most annoying monster in Crystal Caves. They move at great speeds and in somewhat random paths.
8) These are the strongest enemies in the game. Be very cautious when approaching them.
9) This creature is very noisy. He is also strange.
10) These monsters are easy to kill, however, they have that annoying ability to become invisible.
11) These spiders are extremely easy to defeat. Just be careful when standing under them. They have a tendancy to shoot webs at you.
12) These are by far the most disgusting monsters in the game. Stand underneath one. Is it dropping eggs? Or are those bird-bombs?
13) Purple snake of death... Or is that barney in disguise? Watch out for these things. They like to hide in walls and come out just before you are directly adjacent to them. It's generally easier to run away from them than to stand there and try to kill one.
14) Shroom Of Doom. These are actually really easy to kill... if you know how. You need to wait for them to stand up. They are invulnerable when in their sitting position.
15) These are easy to kill... the only hard part is hitting them. They tend to bounce all over the screen.
16) Mining Cars. What are they carrying? Perhaps the life that you lost when you hit the last one...
17) These robot-like objects are a true nuisance. The walk all over the place AND they try to shoot you.
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I <B><U>STRONGLY</B></U> suggest you change ALL the captions to the ones I just typed up. No offense meant, but your english really isn't all that great, and many of those don't make sense. I'd think your best bet is to just copy and paste the ones I made for ya.
-Richard-
(in the CCE image)
1) Very easy to kill, however, one must be patient when it dies. You musn't walk over its buddy.
2) Pretty much the same as the first. Easy to kill.
3) These monsters are larger than many of the others in the game. They occaisionally appear in small areas with lots of crystals.
4) These monsters are REALLY crazy, however, they are simple to kill.
[not sure what you mean about standing over and shoot]
5) What is this? It's the most bizarre thing you will EVER see. Note that you can only hurt him when his eyes are open.
6) Strange robot of the future. The funniest thing is when two or more of them attack you simultaneously
7) The most annoying monster in Crystal Caves. They move at great speeds and in somewhat random paths.
8) These are the strongest enemies in the game. Be very cautious when approaching them.
9) This creature is very noisy. He is also strange.
10) These monsters are easy to kill, however, they have that annoying ability to become invisible.
11) These spiders are extremely easy to defeat. Just be careful when standing under them. They have a tendancy to shoot webs at you.
12) These are by far the most disgusting monsters in the game. Stand underneath one. Is it dropping eggs? Or are those bird-bombs?
13) Purple snake of death... Or is that barney in disguise? Watch out for these things. They like to hide in walls and come out just before you are directly adjacent to them. It's generally easier to run away from them than to stand there and try to kill one.
14) Shroom Of Doom. These are actually really easy to kill... if you know how. You need to wait for them to stand up. They are invulnerable when in their sitting position.
15) These are easy to kill... the only hard part is hitting them. They tend to bounce all over the screen.
16) Mining Cars. What are they carrying? Perhaps the life that you lost when you hit the last one...
17) These robot-like objects are a true nuisance. The walk all over the place AND they try to shoot you.
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I <B><U>STRONGLY</B></U> suggest you change ALL the captions to the ones I just typed up. No offense meant, but your english really isn't all that great, and many of those don't make sense. I'd think your best bet is to just copy and paste the ones I made for ya.
-Richard-
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It availith ye not to replicate thee workes of those withe doobbie-ous credentials!
And about the C-C editting.... compose in Word/WPerf and use the spell/grammer check if you need help. Cut and paste when done. Saves you from some of the "post-crit-edit-post-crit..." cycle.
And about the C-C editting.... compose in Word/WPerf and use the spell/grammer check if you need help. Cut and paste when done. Saves you from some of the "post-crit-edit-post-crit..." cycle.
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