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WolfLarsen Newbie

 Joined: 01 Jul 2006 Posts: 9
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Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 11:50 pm
Post subject: broken heart poem SEXY TRANSVESTITE |
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broken heart poem
Human Body Parts Talking to Each Other
in the Refrigerator
By Wolf Larsen
(First published in Other Voices Literary Magazine,
online edition)
The earth got lost and couldn't find its orbit around the sun, then your refrigerator opened its huge gigantic mouth and began licking the moon, the traffic driving by became thousands of restless syllables trying to bash out of your head, then your building jumped on a molecule and floated away to one of your memories, and nobody could find the ground because the earth was lost inside a poem so everybody floated away into the ocean of black coffee that surrounded the earth and drowned and the poem whirled out of control of the Poet and ate a huge hole through the sky and all the suns poured transvestites all over the earth and then everything began floating out of your house and the poem became a car crash
Copyright 2004 by Wolf Larsen. All Rights Reserved. |
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Check-Mate Lover Of The Tiny Guybrush

 Joined: 12 Jan 2003 Posts: 954 Location: Canada
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 4:36 pm
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I liked everything except transvestites....
Kind of made the whole thing crude....
Other then that, I liked it  |
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WolfLarsen Newbie

 Joined: 01 Jul 2006 Posts: 9
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 4:30 pm
Post subject: Hello. |
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Thanx Check-Mate I'm glad you liked it.
Cheers!
Wolf Larsen |
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GAMER Gaming Demi-god

 Joined: 22 Sep 2002 Posts: 1292 Location: chasing chikeds in the snow!
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 10:45 pm
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I like this one better than the one i just read...I like the "thousands of restless syllables". Very nice.
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WolfLarsen Newbie

 Joined: 01 Jul 2006 Posts: 9
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Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 6:43 pm
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Thank you Gamer. It's natural to like some pieces more than others.
Cheers!
Wolf Larsen |
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