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DOSGames.com site update February 5th 2005

 
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emmzee
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 7:37 pm     Post subject: DOSGames.com site update February 5th 2005 Reply with quote

See! The front page has been updated with new information thusly!

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Hello! Added a few new games today ... many of these are classics, or remakes of classic games. The games added are: Cosmo Chicken, KrisKros, Laser Light, Logo, PC*Bert, Scrambled Eggs and Willy the Worm. Download from the Newest Additions page. Thanks! 'til next time ...

Lemmie know if I screwed anything up. Thankees. Benevolent
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Elign
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 7:55 pm     Post subject: Reply with quote

"Download from the Newest Additions page" should be "Download them from the Newest Additions page".

Remove the first comma (classics, or) and add a comma between "Eggs" and "and".

"site Windows Games" should be "site: Windows Games" (add a colon)

Use a lowercase b for "beta"

"'til next time..." is a sentence fragment. Either delete it, or use something that isn't a sentence fragment (like "'til next time, keep visiting DOSGAMES.COM for the coolest DOS games")

Cosmo Chicken description: Use a colon instead of an exclamation point for NOTE TO ALL

I can't find any other errors... Hope it helps Happy
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Thunderdog
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 9:17 pm     Post subject: Reply with quote

Emmzee got served.

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Wally
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 9:36 pm     Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm It shouldnt really matter at the moment lol.

Poor Emmzee has enough in his hands

Congratulatory Emmzee
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emmzee
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 11:09 pm     Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you for the grammar critique ... as penance, I have just read the majority of "The Elements of Style":

http://www.bartleby.com/141/

Wink I'll make the changes suggested by Elign tomorrow Congratulatory

(Until today I was unaware of the proper rules for using commas at the end of lists! Maybe I should've tried to stay awake in highschool English class. Oh well, I've noticed that I tend to use too many commas anyways. Tbbbbbth!)
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