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dosraider
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There is no syrup on it, I want syrup on it, plenty syrup.
Nevermind, have taken my grandchildren on a trip,we want this, we want that,we want we want we want.... grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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wardrich
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Location: Ontario Canada
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| Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:19 pm
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| Larry Laffer wrote: | I'm not sharing my home-made-made-by-me ice cream with you!
You can have this instead! 
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Those look like bath balls... I see what you're up to here. lol. |
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GAMER
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Location: chasing chikeds in the snow!
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Hahaha. So they do.
I finished my story last night, handed it to my teacher for review today. Asked a few of my school chums to read it too.
So far the reaction has been positive. My English teacher thinks i am sick however.
If anyone wants to read it before i post it all on here next wed evening, PM me your email. Dosraider, if you are one of these people, i deleted the original PM, so you'll have to tell me again.
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Larry Laffer
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| wardrich wrote: | | Those look like bath balls... I see what you're up to here. lol. |
Hey! I thought I killed you! Twice!
And Gamer, you are sick! And we all know that, funny the way your teacher didn't expect something like that out of you! |
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dosraider
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Excellent.
You must be a dark personality. Very dark.
Hmmm, I wonder if many here will understand what the title of "CHAPTER TWELVE" means. Since when you write Dutch? lolz.
I'm gonna print it out in 'bold' and let my ol'mother (76) read it, think she also gone like it.
I bet she will say * Such a young girl and writing desperate stories as this, the poor kid, must have lived a hard youth in a dump somewhere*.
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wardrich
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| Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 9:15 am
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Chapter 12's called The Funeral... that's not dutch. lol.
My copy must be out of date  |
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dosraider
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CHAPTER TWELVE:
NOT CHAPTER 12
Not the same !!!!!!
Me guess it's a bit too difficult for poor wardrich.
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Larry Laffer
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Ooh, Gamer, haul that update in one of my emails too, I doubt I'll get to log into MSN for a while!  |
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GAMER
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Haha. Despite my creative genius, the double up of Chapters was unintentional. Thanks for picking that up. Haha.
Larry - I've sent you the updated one, with the chapters fixed.
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Larry Laffer
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Ah, yes! Very good, very good! No, really!
And chapter "FIFTEEN"'s title was yes, well, yes!  |
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wardrich
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| dosraider wrote: | CHAPTER TWELVE:
NOT CHAPTER 12
Not the same !!!!!!
Me guess it's a bit too difficult for poor wardrich.
LMAOROTF. |
Oh, oops. I r fail at teh redin'. Thems there storeys are too adfansed for me. |
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